NEEDS REWORKING |
NEEDS REFINING |
EXCELLENT |
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Focus |
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Writing lacks a definite and unifying
persuasive purpose: its argumentative claim is vague or
inconsequential for the audience and/or it strays from its claim. It
is unlikely to persuade its designated audience. |
Writing is unified by a definite
persuasive purpose: its claim is clear and consequential for the
audience and it sticks to the focus stated by the claim. It seems
likely to achieve its persuasive purpose |
In addition to being unified, writing is
founded in a claim that is both an insightful response to the
rhetorical problem and valuable for the audience. The writing
clearly achieves its persuasive purpose. |
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Development |
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Writing provides weak support for the
claim: its evidence or supporting arguments are insufficient-sketchy
and unconvincing-and/or are inappropriate for the audience and
purpose. Sources are chosen or used irresponsibly. |
Writing provides adequate support for the
claim: it incorporates enough evidence or supporting arguments to be
convincing and arguments that are appropriate to the audience and
purpose. Sources are chosen and used fairly and responsibly in
support of the claim. |
Beyond sufficiency and appropriateness,
writing uses evidence or supporting arguments in an especially
persuasive way-lively, informative, and engaging. Sources are well
chosen and used with insight in support of the claim. |
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Organization |
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Writing lacks coherence: the
relationships among the ideas are unclear, a result of an
organizational structure that is not appropriate to the persuasive
purpose and/or of inadequate transitional material |
Writing is coherent: the relationships
among the ideas are generally clear; the organizational structure
may be followed with little difficulty and is appropriate to the
persuasive purpose; suitable transitional material aids the reader
in following the logic of the argument. |
Writing achieves a smooth and logical
flow of thought that seems natural. Its organizational structure is
easily navigated and incorporates transitions that effectively guide
the reader through the argument. |
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Style |
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Style and tone weaken the argument by
being unclear and/or inappropriate to the audience or purpose:
sentence structure is too simple or overly complex or monotonous and
doesn't place emphasis on important ideas; word choice is cliched,
dull, inconsistent, or unsuitable to audience or purpose. |
Style and tone support the persuasive
purpose: sentences are clear and incorporate proper emphasis; they
are written at a level appropriate to the audience; word choice is
suitable to the audience and purpose and avoids wordiness and
redundancy. |
In addition to being clear and
appropriate, style enhances the persuasive purpose: it is lively and
inventive; sentence structure is varied and highly readable; choice
of words is fresh and interesting, making the ideas memorable and
powerful. |
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Grammar and Mechanics |
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The kind and number of grammatical and
mechanical errors seriously impede the progress of the reader and
undermine the credibility of the writer. Sources are documented
inadequately. |
Reader is not impeded by grammatical and
mechanical errors. Writing demonstrates general mastery of Standard
Written English. Sources are documented adequately, using a
documentation system that is appropriate to the audience. |
Writing has virtually no problems with
grammar and mechanics, demonstrating a mature command of Standard
Written English. |